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leaf set sail on creek
bubbles brief moment at play
above all else – fate
PR
1/26/15
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Play
leaf set sail on creek
bubbles brief moment at play
above all else – fate
PR
1/26/15
thoughts and entanglements 
Oh yes, very visual to imagine the bubbles playing …the leaf bouncing around.
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Oh good, I did it then. That’s what I was after. Such a thrill when the scene in your head makes it onto the page. Thanks!
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Reading this haiku was like a vignette in animation:)
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Very nice.
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Thanks Alice:)
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🙂
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This is awesome! Loved how you made use of the prompt to pen this Haiku. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by.
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Impressive thoughts on the prompt. Different and yet, so apt.
There’s playfulness and there’s planning, but so true – above all is fate. Loved it 🙂
My take on the prompt – Perfection plays…
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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