Carpe Diem’s “Haiku Writing Techniques” #4, Surprise



music the earth makes

a different kind of rhythm –

uneasy quiet



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13 responses to “Quiet

  1. Oh the sounds! I can only imagine what you were hearing as you penned these short simple and beautiful lines.. Perhaps birds singing in the background, or the rushing waves under a waterfall. Maybe even crickets or bull frogs alongside a murky bayou. Thank you for sharing jzb!


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