distant sounds of
the boisterous creek
the crackling fire’s
flickering flames holding my gaze
distilling my crowded thoughts
smell of cinnamon sticks
transporting me to tranquil
wrapped in the arms of love
nibbles along jawline to earlobes
controlled exhale of passion’s breath
the warmth of the fire no match
for the fire you stir within
PR
10/11/15
Very moving!
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Thank you. Thanks for stopping by.
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Wonderful engagement of the senses! Well done! And I especially like the twist at the end.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.:)
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I’d forgotten how gorgeous your poetry is–lost track of you with my many blog changes, oh well–I’m following you now!
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Wow! Such a nice compliment. Thank you:)
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Most welcome!
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Ooh–nicely done! Brings some lovely visions to mind…time to go write!
poetryofthenetherworld dot blogspot dot com
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thanks
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Reblogged this on thoughts and entanglements.
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