Today it’s Quadrille at dVerse, with Mish hosting. The poem has to have exactly 44 words. The word that has to be included in the poem is “rock”.
Colorful pebbles wash ashore
as waves deposit a cache that rocks the
colors of the rainbow
How far have you come?
And what dreams did you stir on those far away shores?
Did they too, see the rainbow at the tips of their toes?
11/20/17
This is beautiful. If only those pebbles could answer…..
Thanks for joining in! 🙂
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Thank you Mish, my pleasure ☺
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I like how I’m left questioning was it because you stirred those dreams on distant shores that you’re journey brought you here, the end of the rainbow?
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Aah! I like your thinking🙂. Thank you for stopping in.
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I hope they bring lots of stories and rainbow colors Pat ~ Enjoyed your poem ~
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Thank you Grace.
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Nice praise to colorful stones.
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Thank you.
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I can hear the murmur of the pebbles. Love how you connected them to rainbows and dreams.
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Thank you Björn, that was fun!
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I just love that ending! And your use of the word rock, tying it all together unexpectedly.
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Thank you Sarah…i kinda liked the way the use of “rock” came about too☺☺
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So enchanting,the way you relate rainbows to dreams and pebbles 🙂
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Thanks Vivian.
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😊
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Amazing how many of us connected to colorful pebbles, like my wooden bowl on the coffee table full of polished collected pebbles from everywhere; nice take on the prompt–smile–puts me in mind of Jim Henson’s “Rainbow Connection” sung by Kermit.
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The imagination gets going by just holding one of them I love that it brought back Henson’s “Rainbow Connection”. I just went back to listen to it. It put a smile on my face, thank you Glenn.
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rainbows, dreams, rocks, the shores, lovely ingredients, Pat. Well done. 🙂
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Oh, thank you☺
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Love the questions and the rainbows on the waves!
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Thank you Lynn😉
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Excellent scenery! 😎😎😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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☺🙂😍
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Love this, Pat!
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Thank you Sara☺
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I was captivated by the rainbow as I drifted into a daydream
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Daydreams☺,.aah! If not at the beach, when, thank you.
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Love the visual in your poem, and the questions allowed me to drift off in a dreamy place hearing the water splash on the shore. Thank you!
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That is awesome☺. Thank you.
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