Reeds Tremble
breeze gentle rustle
reeds tremble in moon’s glow
on clear summer night
PR
7/17/2014
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/07/carpe-diem-517-shiki-3-reeds-tremble.html
Reeds Tremble
breeze gentle rustle
reeds tremble in moon’s glow
on clear summer night
PR
7/17/2014
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/07/carpe-diem-517-shiki-3-reeds-tremble.html
I like the way how you’ve written this haiku … and I think you’re on the right track with haiku. Awesome!
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Thanks for stopping by my CD post on ‘reeds’ –
I enjoyed your haiku and photo 🙂
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Thank you.
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I wonder if the rustling would be the same on a cloudy night…
After Shiki
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:)- minus the visibility but enjoyable just the same I think.
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Beautiful companion pieces.
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Thank you, and thanks for stopping by.
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